What do you think? please write i need help.?

Here is the first chapter to the book i am writing for fun. My name is Ryan brooks and this is my story. OH! what a bad way to start this thing off i just, lay here on my bed because i god grounding for sneaking out of the house late and also did`nt tell mom i was. But i had to my best friend`s boyfriend just broke up with her to go out with the school slut, she text me asking to meet her in the woods by my house and i could`nt say no to sammy she`s my best friend and, she dided me. It was very cold outside i whispered sam`s name. Over here she said. She was sitting on a log crying. What happend? i asked. We were going to go see a movie and he showed up almouts an hour late with Kate mill in the car and his arm was around her, he said it was`nt working and it was me not him sammy said crying harder. What a jerk i`m really sorry sam hugging her. I should have known she sounded mad not not me at herself. there was no way to go i told sammy. him and Kate mill are great together i said smiling so true sam said standing up. it`s getting late and if i dont get home soon i`m dead sam said. me too. She hugged me you are the onlyone you can make me happy when i feel like crap. I smiled if it help random guys made the top ten i said smiling. It dose but you helped more. Random guys is our fave band it`s cool because we both have a guy from the band we like not that it would matter because we dont get mad over guys, we think it`s stupid. I really got to get home sam said. Ye- BUZZ! sam got a text she fliped her cell phone top up and read the text, it`s jack she said sounding pissed. What dose that jerk saying? He said he`s sorry for being rude and he wants to stay friends sammy said. What are you going to say write back? i asked. Nothing i`m done with him. Good i said. i got to get home sam said runing out of the woods i could tell she felt better. please write what you think.